BEC商务英语初级答疑精选(二)
（发布时间： 2007-11-1 16:28:00 来自：环球职业教育在线）
学员mika999: P36 4
Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997，peaked at 25% in 1997，and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996，remained steady in 1996 and 1997，but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997，and then recovered in 1998.
Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997，peaked at 25% in 1997，and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996，remained steady in 1996 and 1997，but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997，and then recovered in 1998.
老师回复：Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997应该用不同的词来表述GO UP，peaked at 25% in 1997，and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996，remained steady in 1996 and 1997，but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997，and then recovered in 1998.
表达很清楚,非常不错
不足之处是 应该用不同的上升和下降的词汇表达
一个词汇用几遍显得很罗嗦,建议改正
表达很清楚,非常不错
不足之处是 应该用不同的上升和下降的词汇表达
一个词汇用几遍显得很罗嗦,建议改正
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